ORAL PRESENTATION
WRITING
I went to the Pyrenees for about four days, but I don’t remember very well. I left home by car in the morning, very early. The travel was quiet long, about four hours. When I arrived at the hotel, we saw the rooms and left our suitcases. Our room was very comfortable and beautiful, but not very big.
There, I saw very beautiful places: mountains, rivers, lakes... I also visited the “Pantocrator”, a very famous Christian painting. Finally I returned to home by car.
I also spent a little bit of my summer in France. I have been a lot of times in France, but every time, I visit some different places. Last summer, I visited Bordeaux, St Malo and other cities.
In my last summer I also stayed at home, I love it! I went to a painting “class” in Banyoles, with many of my school friends and I also spent a lot of time in the swimming pool, it was very hot!
I had a very good summer in the Pyrenees, France and Banyoles, but the weather was really hot!
PRESENTATION
PRESENTATION
ORAL PRESENTATION OBSERVATION
1. Presentation
Did the powerpoint help your presentation? Yes, of course.
Did you talk/show the photos to the audience? Yes, I did.
2. Body language/eye contact
Did you look at the audience most of the time? I tried to do it most of the time, but I look the presentation too.
Did you stop to seperate the different parts of your speech? Yes, I did.
Did you smile and do gestures to hold the attention of the audience? No, I didn't smile because I was so nervious and I didn't do any gestures...
3.Structure
Did you introduce yourself and the topic? Yes, I did.
Did you organise your ideas before start? Yes, I did.
Did you use discourse markers? (first, then, later...) Yes, but not too much.
Did you finish it properly? No... I finish it badly.
4. Content
Was the information too long/short? No, I think the information wasn't too short or long.
Did you introduce interesting information for the audience? Not too much. It was quite boring.
5.Language
Are there any important grammar mistakes? No, I don't think so.
Did you use sentence linkers? (and, but...) Yes, I did.
Did you use new vocabulary from the dictionary? Yes, I did. Which words? Suitcases
Did you use fillers? (Well, you know, for example, one second...) No, I didn't. I will try to use them next time...
6.Pronunciation/intonation
Did you know how to pronounce all the words? Yes, I did. Did you check the dictionary, a classmate or your teacher? No, because I know how to pronounce all of them.
Did you speak calm and slowly? Normal, I think.
Did you change your tone or you used the same monotone? I used the same monotone all the time so I will try to improve this point.
Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I did stops and breaks often.
7.Self-Evaluation
You are your teacher! What mark did you get? I think that, in general, my oral presentation was OK, but there are a lot of things to improve. So, I will try to do it better the next time. My mark: 7.5.
MY CLASSMATES
Laia: She went to Mayfield (London) with her sister Carla for two weeks. In the morning, she did lessons. She also stayed in Sant Antoni de Calonge.
Joan Rigau: He went to Jordan for 9 days. There, he visit the Jordan Desert. A very big and beautiful one. He also went to Petra.
Clàudia Vallmajó: She went to l'Arcada with her cousin Montse and some friends. There, she did a lot of activities. She also went to Alacant. But, there, she didn't go to the beach.
Maria Port: She met many friend in a summer camp, l'Arcada. She went to Andorra with her family for five days. And she went shopping with her mother most of the time.
Adrià: He stayed in País Basc for three days. There, he visit a football stadium. He also visited Victoria, the capital of País Basc. He went to a summer football camp too.
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